Evaluation - Question 4

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nRPwERJ3XdU

Evaluation - Question 3

What have you learned from your audience feedback?

In order to answer this question I decided to ask teenagers that were aged 16-19 years old as that the age boundary for my target audience. I asked them what they like and disliked about my newspaper and both ancillary tasks. By asking these two questions allowed me to know what I did well and what I could have done better. Below are some the profiles of the people that gave me feedback and the links to hear their feedback and also what I have learned from their feedback.

Name: Hannah

Age: 16

Student

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K7zqgf_-QYs&edit=vd

Name : Ebenezer

Age: 19

Student

http://www.youtube.com/watch?edit=vd&v=3zny047jfxs

Name: Blanche

Age: 19

Student

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5SBoPsxEf0c

                                     
                                       


 Name: Martin


Age: 18

Student

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ttsc_Lvtu_A&list=HL1368314808

Evaluation: Question 2

http://prezi.com/hwll3c2esytj/untitled-prezi/

Evaluation: Question 1

http://www.slideshare.net/phobbie/phoebbies-evaluation-question-1

The Inside of my Newspaper

Creating The Inside of my Newspaper

For the second page of my newspaper I wanted to have an interview format. My inspiration came from a section in the 'Metro'. The page has a question and answer style and also a picture of the celebrity they have interviewed. It also features an advert.

I plan to use this idea for my second page, this is because I had to incorporate an element of informality and fun as my front page could be deemed as too serious.

For my interview I asked a student at Blackheath Bluecoat School who also plays for the Blackheath Rugby Team to feature in my newspaper. The survey that I did initially as a way to find out what teenagers liked to read in newspapers showed that, a majority of teenagers enjoyed reading about sports and would also like to see more of sports in a newspaper. Therefore I decided to include a sports section in my newspaper as a way in which to attract readers.

In order to create my second page, I actually interviewed Neil Graham, the rugby player and wrote out what he said. Not everything he said I used in my article as I felt that it was irrelevant.

Final Front Page