Wednesday, 1 May 2013

My Newspaper




































This was initially the first newspaper I created. I then decided to show a few people what I created in order to receive feedback. I asked an 18 year old student Keana Mullings-Brown and she stated that, "I like your newspaper; however you have repeated a whole column." I myself did not notice that I had done so, and used this feedback and was able to correct the error I had made.

I then asked a 16 year old boy Thomas Cannings who said, “I don’t know why that bottom right picture is there as there is no caption to explain its relevance.”  I had forgotten to include a caption explaining why I had put that picture there and decided to include one when creating my final edited paper.

The third person that gave me feedback was a 19 year old student, Jolene Lukeba, who stated that, “Your newspaper does not have the price this means that my newspaper is free. I then chose to include ‘FREE’ at the top of my newspaper. As I had decided to make newspaper free.

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